全国高考英语满分作文赏析

　【北京卷】 【试题回放】 第一节情景作文 （20 分）

　美国中学生 jeff 将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文， 经协商安排住在你家。

　假设你是李 华，请给 Jeff 写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

　注意： 1. 信的开头已为你写好。 2.词数不少于 60。

　Dear Jeff,

　I'm Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I 'm very happy to learn that you 're going to

　stay with my fam ily while you 're in Beijing.

　While you are here, we 'll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple

　of chairs and a TV. You 'll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so

　we could go to school together by bi ke. At noon we 'll eat at the school dining hall. I 'm sure you like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It 'll be a lot of fun.

　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We 'll try our best to make your

　stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

　Best wishes,

　Li Hua

　【安徽卷】【试题回放】 假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物， 该校 格林先生来信询问有关情况。

　请你给她写封回信，假如你是李华，美国一所友好学校准备与 你们学校共同创办一份中学生英文刊物， 该校格林先生来信询问有关情况。

　请你给她写封回 信，主要内容如下：

　l 表示赞成。

　l 提出你喜欢的栏目。

　l 简要说明理由。

　注意： 1. 词数 100 左右。

　2. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好。

　适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 4.参考栏目栏目 一colum n

　Dear Mr. Green,

　I am very excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine together. That sounds great! And I definitely agree with you on that.

　Some of the columns which you mentioned in the letter are really my cup of tea. Say, “culture express ” gives us a better understanding of the world. Sinpcle fpreoom different parts of the world have different values, it 's necessary to learn from each other. This will offer a wonderful

　chance. Apart from that, “blurt out ” is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms

　and improve oral English. Last but not least, “entertainment is s”o cool! The popular singers, actors and celebrities are so catchy and attractive that you absolutely can 't miss it! Teenage

　just fond of the trendy things.

　Well, I can 't list more. I really can 't wait to read that magazine!

　Yours faithfully,

　Li Hua

　【北京卷】 【试题回放】情景作文 假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华， 为响应绿化祖国的号召， 你班四月十二日去郊 区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的 “绿色行

　动”专栏写一篇以 “Green Action in Our Class为题的英文稿件。

　注意：词数不少于 60 提示词：郊区 suburbs

　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it 'osur duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　【北京卷】 【试题回放】开放作文 请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 50

　In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.

　What an interesting picture! A western young man, sitting at a table, is ready to eat a bowl of noodles. He is holding two forks the same way as we Chinese hold chopsticks. He is trying so hard to pick up the noodles that he is sweating a lot. At first glance, I think it ' s a bit f Chinese take for granted that chopsticks are the tools for eating noodles. The man in the picture is trying to copy us. Obviously he is doing it the hard way. Maybe using one fork will do a better job, In my opinion, we don ' t need to copy others ' ways of itmhienskiangs.imSopmleretway of doing things may be a better way.

　【全国卷】 【试题回放】

　假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda),—直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣 迭哥动物园出生的大熊猫 “苏琳”和她的母亲 “白云 ”。现在苏琳即将三岁。

　请根据以下要点给 动物园工作人员写一封信：

　1、 自我介绍 ;2、 祝贺苏琳生日 ;3、 感谢工作人员 ;4、 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

　注意： 1、词数 100 左右 ;2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 ;3、开头语已为你写好。

　例文：

　Dear Sir/Madam,

　Greetings from China!

　I 'm Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I 've been a panda lover since I was a child. About three

　years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I ' vbeeen watching her grow on your website,. Now she 's going to be three. I 'd like to wish her a happy

　birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US.

　By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? Thank you very much in advance.

　Yours truly,

　Li Hua

　全国卷 II 】【试题回放】 家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传。请你用英语为其

　篇文字介绍。主要内容包括：

　1?地点：距白山入口处 500米；

　2?房间及价格：单人间（共20间）,100元/天;双人间 洪15间），150元/天 ;热水淋浴；3. 餐饮：餐厅（中、西餐），咖啡厅（茶、咖啡）；4.游泳池：全天免费开放；5?欢迎预定。

　注意：1?词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　Welcome to Baisha n Mountain Hotel!

　Baisha n Mountain Hotel is now ope n for bus in ess.

　500 meters far from the entrance of Baishan Mountain, it provides single 拟 person room, of

　which the price is RMB100 yuan per day and the number is 20, and 15 double 拟 person rooms, with a price of RMB 150 yuan per day. It also provides hot water bath service. You can enjoy both Chin ese and wester n food in the restaura nt and drink coffee and tea in the cafe. The swim ming pool is ope n for free the whole day. All these services can bring great convenience to you and are very enjoyable. So come to enjoy yourself!

　Welcome to book rooms in Baisha n Mountain.

　【重庆卷】 【试题回放】

　据报道，7岁的美国女孩 Amy Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung cancer)后处于极度的痛苦 之中，美国抗癌协会(ACS)决定，每当Amy收到一封慰问信，就给她增加 3美分的治疗款。

　假如你是新华中学的学生李华，请你用英文给 Amy写一封慰问信，主要内容包括：

　自我介绍

　得知的情况

　表示鼓励

　打算为她做什么

　祝她早日康复

　信的格式已为你写好

　信中不得出现你的真实情况。

　词数100左右。

　请在答题卡上作答。

　Dear Amy,

　I ' nLi Hua from Xin hua Middle School of Chin a. I ' m sorry to hetarat you got the lung

　cancer which brought you great pain. But you should realize that you are young and have a promising great future. So, stand up and fight against the disease! I ' mure you will win. It is reported that the America an ti-ca ncer associati on will don ate three cents upon every comfort letter you receive. So I will tell your situation to all my friends and ask them to write to you. In that way, you will get eno ugh money for you to be cured. Hope you can be well soon.

　Yours,

　Li Hua

　【江苏卷】 【试题回放】

　2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时进

　行，江苏省1，100万学生积极参与了这项活动。

　教育部倡导学生：

　第3页共4页

　u 每天锻炼一小时

　u 健康工作五十年

　u 幸福生活一辈子

　请你根据以上提示， 用英语准备一份发言稿， 向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情 况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。

　1、 发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。

　2、 词数： 120 左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　3、 参考词汇：阳光体育活动 —— a national student sports program;

　教育部 —— the Ministry of Education

　Good afternoon, everyone,

　The national student sports program, waged by the Ministry of Education and aimed at improving students health, was held from 10： 00a.m.~11:00a.m.on April 29， 2007 in many primary and middle schools all over China. Almost 11 million students in Jiangsu province participated in this program.

　The Ministry of Education advocates that we do exercises for one hour a day and can work healthily for 50 years. Our whole life will be very enjoyable.

　In my opinion, we senior high school students should do exercises for one hour a day even though our spare time is limited. Health is a basic condition for our study. If we did not do exercises, we w ouldn ' t be able to get good study records. So every one of you, join the program now!

　Thank you!