轮椅上的多彩人生
时间：2022-12-09 21:40:03 来源：柠檬阅读网 本文已影响 人 
山东 李全忠
Caricature（漫画） artist Zhai Jin is finding innovative ways to fully embrace life and fuel his creativity.
From 18 to 32, Zhai Jin hardly left his own home in Anhui Province because of his brittle （易碎 的） bone disease. For a long time, he felt that he was trapped in a small space with little knowledge of and limited access to society. He longed to see the outside world.
In 2016, he left for Beijing to attend a training program named Independent Living.One day, he had a late-night meal with his friends. On his way home, he was the only person on that road, apart from a few drunken men. At that moment, he suddenly felt that the road belonged only to him. It was a whole new experience for him. He felt that he had acquired something for the first time, simply by journeying alone on the road.
In Beijing, he was introduced to a dance where everyone, disabled or not, can enjoy dancing. The dance encourages physical contact with others. When he descended from his wheelchair to the floor, suddenly, he felt that his body was useful and could support a strong man, even two people. He felt a sense of confidence from the bottom of his heart.
Since then, he has become involved in various art projects and is making a living with his skills as a caricature artist.
To improve his ability in character design, he practiced creating characters that were based on real people, a style that he later learned was quite similar to Japanese caricature art.
Knowing that there was a demand for such drawings, and confident in his own abilities, in 2019, he launched his own brand Gene"s Caricature, offering personalized caricatures. He often set up his stall in a market and sat in front of clients, asking and learning what they would like to be created. Also, he opened an account on Bilibili, which now has around 7,000 followers. He posts video blogs of himself creating caricatures and about his everyday life. He says painting for a client always gives him a sense of achievement.
Under one such video, one viewer commented, “You"re really very hardworking. Your creations might appear simplistic, but they are able to bring people hope, happiness,warmth and comfort.”
Activity A Reading for understanding
Ⅰ. Text-centered chunks
be trapped in 被困在
leave for 动身去
apart from 除……之外
on one"s way （to） 在某人去……的路上
belong to 属于
be introduced to 初次了解
descend from...to 从……下到……
be based on 以……为基础
be similar to 与……相似
set up 建立
Ⅱ. Text-centered sentences
一、with结构作状语
For a long time, he felt that he was trapped in a small space with little knowledge of and limited access to society. 很长一段时间，他觉得自己被困在一个狭小的空间里，对社会的了解很少，接触社会的机会也有限。
【点石成金】本句中，that引导的从句作动词felt的宾语；
with little knowledge of and limited access to society为with结构作状语，表示伴随的状态。
【运用迁移】小男孩跑向了妈妈，脸上挂着灿烂的微笑。
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二、现在分词作状语
Knowing that there was a demand for such drawings, and confident in his own abilities, in 2019, he launched his own brand Gene"s Caricature, offering personalized caricatures. 他知道这类画作的市场，并对自己的能力很有信心，在2019年，他推出了自己的品牌Gene"s Caricature，提供个性化的漫画。
【点石成金】本句中，Knowing that there was a demand for such drawings为现在分词作原因状语，offering personalized caricatures为现在分词作伴随状语。
【运用迁移】认识到自己的音乐天赋，他成立了一支叫作“更美好的明天”的乐队，并在世界各地巡回演出。
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Activity B Reading for writing
近日，你对漫画艺术家翟进进行了一次采访。
请根据以下提示，以“Colorful life on the wheelchair”为题写一篇新闻报道，介绍漫画艺术家翟进。
1. 采访时间和地点；
2. 采访内容；
3. 采访后的感受。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 至少需要使用两个本文中解析过的句式。
Colorful life on the wheelchair
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写作导引
本次写作属于新闻报道，其内容共包括三个要点，其中，采访的内容和采访后的感受需要基于原文来提取和整合， 再将提取和整合出来的信息选择性地写入新闻报道中，必要时须对原文中的语言进行改写。
一、语篇解码
（一）主题归纳
What is the text mainly about?
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（二）结构梳理与内容分析
Fill in the blanks with a word or a phrase according to the text.
二、素材积累
embrace life 拥抱生活
fuel one"s creativity 激发某人的创造力
long to do 渴望做……
become involved in 参与；
涉及；
卷入
make a living 谋生
post video blogs 发布视频博客
find innovative ways 找到创新的方法
feel a sense of confidence from the bottom of one"s heart 从某人的内心深处感觉到一种自信
be confident in 对……有信心
a sense of achievement 成就感
三、写作支架
本次的写作任务是写一篇新闻报道。
新闻报道是指对新闻事件或典型人物从不同视角、不同层次、不同侧面进行报道。新闻报道在写作时常采用“倒金字塔”的结构，包括导语、正文和结尾三大部分。新闻的导语部分要开门见山，直入主题；
正文部分是对新闻事件或人物的多角度挖掘和细节补充；
结尾部分多为对新闻事件或人物的评价，评价时注意要客观、公正。为体现新闻报道的客观性，新闻报道人通常不直接发表对新闻事件或人物的个人看法，而是借助第三方间接地表达自己的观点或态度。
四、语篇过手
1. 合理布局，寻找支撑信息
导语部分：除了简述采访时间和地点外，还要表明采访者和被采访者。
正文部分：采访对象的背景信息（新闻背景）和主要事件。
结尾部分：采访的反响（采访感受）。
2. 明确时态，理清行为时间
叙述采访时间和地点使用过去时，叙述人物背景信息多使用一般过去时，叙述人物的主要事件主要使用过去时和现在时。
3. 细心审题，落实写作要求
篇幅要求：80词左右。
语言要求：至少需要使用两个本文中解析过的句式。
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