[奶奶笑了] 奶奶笑了作文

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　　That day Grandma was ill. My parents were both out. I was very worried. 　　I went to Grandma"s bed. She looked very ill. I looked at her white face and white hair, tears came into my eyes. ① I sank into deep thought.
　　 Once when Mother and I were ill, Grandma took good care of us all day and all night, then she became very thin and very tired, and looked even older.
　　Today she got ill herself, and my parents were out, so I ought to look after her, too. I asked my grandma, "Grandma, would you like some hot water?" She said," My good little girl, you are too young. You needn"t do that for me." "Yes, I can. Grandma,"I said. "I will do it for you right now. " " Then be careful. "②
　　 I came to the kitchen, and began to heat up the water. I turned on the cooker care- fully, and put the kettle (水壶) down on it. Ten minutes later, the water boiled.
　　 I took a glass of water to Grandma. She saw me and began to smile. Seeing her smiling, I smiled too. ③
　　 I stayed with her till my parents came back.
　　 All of us should respect (尊敬) the old people.
　　
　　一天，奶奶病倒了，父母亲都不在家，真急死我了。
　　我站在奶奶床前，她看起来病得很厉害。看着奶奶苍白的脸色和满头的白发，我热泪盈眶，想了很多很多。
　　我和妈妈也害过病，是奶奶整天整夜地照顾我们，那时她累得瘦了许多，人也显得老了。
　　奶奶如今卧病在床，父母不在，我要尽力照顾她。“奶奶，你喝水吗?”她说：“好孩子，你还小，不需要你做什么。”“不，我会烧水，奶奶。”我说，“我这就去。”“噢，可要小心。”
　　我来到厨房，烧起水来。我小心地打开炉灶，把水壶放在上面，大约10分钟，水烧开了。
　　我把一杯开水送到奶奶的床前，她看着我笑了。奶奶笑了，我也笑了……
　　我一直陪她到父母回来。
　　我们都应该尊敬老人。
　　
　　精彩点拨
　　这是一篇短小精悍的记叙文，作者记述了父母不在家，祖母又病倒在床，自己主动去照顾祖母的事，还回忆起自己有病被祖母照看的情景。叙事清楚，感情深厚，表明了尊长爱幼的温和的家庭气氛。语言流畅，中心突出。在文章中使用极好的词语和句型有：both out，look at，tears come into one"s eyes， sink into deep thought，take good care of，ought to，look after，turn on，take...to等。此外，还用了till引导的从句，也很恰当。这些都值得初学写作者学习。
　　注意：①第二段第三句应改为“When I looked at her white face and white hair tears came into my eyes.”才符合英语句法原则。②此句应改为“Be careful，then．”才符合习惯用法。因为“then”在句中其前加上逗号(，)，其意为“那么”；没有逗号作“当时”讲。因此，应译成“那么，你要小心。”③若too当“也”讲，置其句尾时，其前常常要加逗号(，)。

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